Bless the Rain~Awarded by bill~
It wasn’t as if it wasn’t expected It happens…often enough that one should be prepared Leaking life from wisps of ether Dripping, somber and cold Moisture infuses her being...
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Speechless upon finishing this one M, such a powerful write with exquisite detail from beginning to end..............Standing Ovation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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well...this is ...nice... gotta be careful...sash doesn't like swearing...so no dirty words like f................. still there is a value spent here...i like an intent before you did it few women...
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Heart rending dear youWhy are some men so callousI love the dripping rain throughoutand this is so delicately writtenEmbrace the cleansing rain
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All wounds heal eventually whether sel imposed or inflicted by someone else. A beautifully composed scribe
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This was very well done- I love the forthrightness as Louis pointed out, the emotion of it is dealt with in real depth in this making it flow feminine. I wanted to use a strong word as well because...
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Beautiful presentation and powerful writing, your passion comes alive throughout, much enjoyed
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Beautifully penned. The rain does have a healing and cleansing effect, washing away many negative thoughts and heartaches. You write it well.
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My apology. I missed this one and I see it has been here for awhile....I am deeply moved by this poem...The use of metaphor always inriches a poem, at least for me, and your excellent use in this...
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